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[-1] corrections - Hitesh - 06/07/2010 16:22
    •corrected - Boris - 06/07/2010 17:30

Автор: Hitesh <brijvasi@gmail.com> ВВЕРХ ОТВЕТИТЬ ФОРУМ
Тема: corrections
Отправлено: 06/07/2010 16:22

seventh line of Mother Earth article.
corrected (just add [censored])
And do you think cave man was smart enough to make iron from an iron ore.

eighth line.
you can delete How, how because.........start sentance with Somebody.....
pl delete [censored]

second para fifth line

[censored] of laser been

third para

second line
Consciousness instead of consensus

fourth line.
creative instead of cremated
fifth line....
created instead of cremated....



Автор: Boris ВВЕРХ ОТВЕТИТЬ ФОРУМ
Тема: corrected
Отправлено: 06/07/2010 17:30

thanks

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